pretty good
for your first piece this is pretty good, i liked the melody, but you could of used a different synth, but thats my opinion, and the kick got a little boring after a while, you could of varied that a little bit, and the drums... you should try to make that a little louder, but then again this is your first piece so i cant really be too harsh ^_^, well done again.
4/5 and 8/10 from me XD
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