hmm
not bad i have to say, just a few points id like to add to the song. i like the synths you've chosen and the way you used your FX sounds, the melody is also catchy.
going on about that melody, its overused, i know its classed as trance and trance is usually repetitive, but this melody is just overused, theres a 2nd melody used at 1:12 which maybe you could of used a bit more instead of that one melody and changing the synth used for that melody.
the length also gets to me, its a little short, but nothing that cant be fixed up if you decide to work on it.
i like how you used the cut off frequency in the song, adds a nice effect to it making it sound more attractive if you get me.
the piano melody at the end is a catchy melody too, you could of kept that going cause that melody just got way to repetitive =/, still the piano was well made.
all in all i can see improvement on this, so you get my 5/5 but 8/10, i hope to see an improved version of this soon. good work none the less
[3nL]