Not bad
hey you got quite a good tune here, im just not to fond of your intro... but i like the beat, its a tune you can dance to =]. If you add a catchy intro and try varying ur beat then i'm sure this song will be tonnes better, i think you should vary your beat becuase it's the same the whole way through your song and it gets a little boring after a while.
7/10 from me
well done so far though